Hey, I stopped by for a listen. I like the idea and kudos to you for taking it on. Right now, it's a bit sloppy. I think you can make it work, though, it's just going to take some time. When (or if) you decide to redo this, really focus on getting the rhythms tight. The leads and lead lines could benefit by a little softer approach to the sound, a light delay, for example in the mix. I think you are well on your way to having a great track. I enjoyed listening. Steve